peanutgallery007

Mmm... so rejuvenating. I love the truth and feeling. When writing poetry, truth is everything. I have no nit- picks (which is a once- in- a- lifetime thing.) Also, I ...

Hiya! Please keep your hands and feet in the ride at all times... :lol: I’m in love, I’m in love, I’m in love I really think that the repetition is ...

Hiya! Sorry, but I always feel as if I shouldn't just jump right in to the review. But you would not sully your voice with such overuse. Your brain I ...

Hiya! Here as requested :D The night was young, the moon barley peeking above the tree tops. barley should be barely, deary. :) Also, the moon cannot peek above a ...

Nit- Picks Overcome with inertia She lets her head fall onto the pillow, I can tell you meant for that to be two lines by the way you capitalized "she". ...

No no! That's what YWS is for :) improvement on writing. Post anytime, we'll be glad to help! :D I want something good to come out of all I have ...

I promised you a review on a different piece of yours, but everyone caught what I'd had to say already, so I thought I mine as well review a different ...

I know you asked me for a review, but Sakura/ Antigone caught every little thing I had to say, and I doubt just repeating it would be any good so... ...

You’re smooth and velvety like a peach On the outside I think this would do better being; "You're as smooth and velvety as a peach; on the outside" I think ...

Hiya! I'm April, here to review! :P Who am I if I never know love? If I roam the earth and never go home? If I drink, though never calm ...

Wonderful poetry, hon! The rhyme scheme sounds perfectly natural. You are a rhyming pro! The only little flaws I found were these; The hearts of Greatness I will see. Greatness ...

Hi there! I love your poem; the description was awesome. Now, onto the actual review; I saw that you didn't have much capitalization. The punctuation was OK, but if you ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm April. Nice to meet you! you purposely ignore me knowing i can't go a day without speaking to you . I think "purposely" should ...

Hello! I'm Peanut. Nice to meet you! :P Your capitalization is... interesting, to say the least. In some lines, there was capitalization right in the middle, for no reason... not ...

I would re- write the first sentence; ‘Let’s not forget who we are and what we’re actually here for…’, my grandfather posed to me in his reassuring intelligent tone on ...