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Linny, as you know I hate that song. But your story showed emotion and conflict between the characters, and your plot was wonderful. I might just have to go listen ...

Fragile_heart, I thank you. I will rewrite it. I won't use your rewrite but you gave me an idea. Thanks! ~peanut~

Thanks April! About the whole originality thing, the truth is I didn't ever know what I was doing. I will try to take your advice and change somethings. Thank you, ...

Hi, Simply. This was your NaNo I see. I didn't find any grammar mistakes and the plot was good. I would like to see what happens to Alex at her ...

House of Night series by P.C and Kristin Cast and the Blue Bloods series by Melissa de la Cruz are awesome books. I highly recommend them. ~peanut~

Hey Cheshire, this was very well written and I can't wait to read more. The only thing I found was this: Yu all called him insane! I think it was ...

Wondermous Bear. You truly aren't that bad. I'm gonna like bug you for the music. I think Cat said she was going to get our band teacher to let her ...

Hey Bear. Wonderful job. I have read Edgar Allen Poe's poems many times but would have never thought to write about him writing them this way. ~peanut~

I loved it Twelfth Night. I hate to say it but New Moon was my favorite book in the series(Jacob's better the Edward). I thought it was hilarious. I liked ...

Wonderful Cat! I hope you win so Jared can sing this. June has already critiqued this so I won't tear it apart any more. Tehe I just figured out how ...

Hey Cat, my beautiful mess wasn't nearly as bad as I thought. And the tense thing was just a typo. Other than that I hope you liked it. ~peanut~

Thanks Kaylan!

Yes thanks for the review cat. That abby thing was pretty funny! ~peanut~

Awwwwwww Emmy i think im going to cry! I miss her too, good job btw! ~peanut~

Hey, cat i still like your rap lol! It hasnt gotten old yet. I just hope we dont have to do anything else like this in science. ~peanut~