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Okay, I was reading this more of to see if it made sense than anything else :) And I think you did a pretty good job. I noticed that you ...

I agree with Knightley about some of the sentences. Especially the part about the bricks. It took the emotion out of that paragraph and it took me a little bit ...

Well then. Raymond's just a big ball of lovely isn't he? I'm kidding. But he was rather bipolar toward that girl. Okay now for the review. Would the hangover this ...

Eep, okay I'm a little reluctant to review this :P but I will anyway. I'm gonna be a little techincal so brace yourself. An angel above my shoulder, An angel ...

Jared! I can't believe no one else has reviewed this! But I have to say the length I thought was good, but it might have scared other people who hadn't ...

Okay, Bailey. This might seem mean but I agree with Eli and you know I'm a mean person :P The sun is out; make it go away. The bunnies hop; ...

Jare, it's not horrible. I only saw one spot that had something that confused me and I think it was just a typo. Her husband had quite expressively told her ...

Hi, Em :) Here's the review. First off there were a few typos. “We have gathered her today Her should be here. I know there were more, but I can't ...

Your imagery never ceases to amaze me. The way you describe things is like nothing I've seen or have ever thought to describe something. I really don't have anything bad ...

25th June, 2009 11:00 PM I finally killed Amanda Bailey. I finally did it. Okay, I don't really know why you had to repeat that. It was tough but somehow ...

I'm gonna compare you to an author, Splodey. This reminded me of things I read in Wintergirls by Laurie Halse Anderson. The use of things like smile-slides, really stood out ...

Hey Emily! I'm gonna try to review this. Why won't you show me Just how you really feel? Okay, this line doesn't really flow that well, I don't think. I ...

I highly recommend Dancing on the Edge by Han Nolan (it's about a dancer). I think it's one of the best books I've read in a while. Also by her ...

Hi, Emily. I haven't reviewed in a while so stick with me :) "You're adorable." "You look pretty." I thought this was an interesting way to start off. It's made ...

Hi Stori here is the review :) Wolves have little concept of "I." So forgive us if we are forgetful. Before this story deteriorates, let me introduce myself. My name's ...