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But James dos not move. Typo. I was waiting to catch you for something.(: Her hair, dark like night, dark like her name, falls in glossy sheets. Long and silky, ...

Lassie, I only have time to review to the Astrix but I'm loving it so far and will be back tomorrow to finish this chapter. Here I go: walked in ...

I love how you did this, Lassie. I thought the imagery was very good for a prologue. I agree with the other reviewers that some of the sentences were a ...

I'm reading it again before the movie comes out. I think it's better the second time reading it actually. But maybe that's because I'm so excited about going to see ...

Stella! First off, good luck with the contest! Peace. Quiet for the city, rest for the soldiers, a chance to breathe easily for the first time in ten years. I ...

Hi Embee! There were a few times in the dialogue when it wasn't punctuated correctly. “Get away from them, Samantha,” Ace said , “Come over here, next to me.” Like ...

Hi Blackbird! I Nitpicks: He retreats from the old woman backwards, eyes still fixed upon her. I thought this sounded odd. Maybe reword it to: He retreats backwards, away from ...

Hi Quill. I thought I'd come check this out since you reviewed my piece. It amazes me how two people can use the same picture as a prompt but write ...

Hi, Em. Since this only has one review I'm not gonna hold anything back. I. NITPICKS First of all, Reichskristallnacht, is spelled with an s after the c :) “Where ...

I don't really have any experience editing poems either so this should be fun. I'm just gonna sorta review it for grammar then for the overall story of it. Here ...

I'm not really sure what this was a fan-fiction of because I had never heard of it so I can't really say much on that side of things. There weren't ...

I've read Wintergirls and I loved it. It's one of my favorite book (I've read it twice). The way Laurie Halse Anderson writes is amazing. I loved how crossing out ...

Lily! Tehe here's your review. And he had stayed inside the lines I think you mean she since it's talking about Emily. “Hannah, you do remember that you’re allergic to ...

JD! Hi. Okay I'm gonna try to review this but there's not much to review. I really liked it. Your short sentences sort of gave it a hectic feel. I ...

Lily, nice. That was totally not what I expected. I liked your characters and think you did a good job of hooking me in the first part of the story. ...