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Re: No one...
I really liked this. as soon as you start reading it you get really into it and the mood just kind of takes over. It put me in a mood ...
Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:31 am -
Re: Big City Life (3)
I really like this story! i feel like i know each character so well and get a vivid description because of the details you put in there. Im really excited ...
Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:00 am -
Re: Can't Fly
That was not just an attempt at writing a song. That was really good! i love music and this sounds like something i would like to listen to. Keep writing ...
Sun Mar 08, 2009 10:09 pm -
Re: What is Success?
I really like this one. haha apparently I'm going to need some help with getting success because this is all true but I'm not very good at believing in myself. ...
Sun Mar 08, 2009 8:45 pm -
Re: Forever
I so jealous that you can write free-form poems like this! I have never been able to make these sound good, but you did an awesome job
Sun Mar 08, 2009 8:30 pm -
Re: I beg of you
This is pretty good but it made me really depressed. It also felt really cold and not very descriptive.
Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:13 am
