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Re: Of Crabs & Buckets
This review is awesome, muchosmuchos muchos gracias. There is no "correct" interpretation, but the way you analysed it was very close to how I intended it to be perceived. It ...
Oct 15, 2016 -
Re: Whispers & Wavelengths
this is the most beautiful thing I've read in awhile. the foreshadowing is impeccable. characterization is thorough and your clean execution of dialogue is huge in that. it's the kind ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: The Evanescence of Bells
Ooh this is exactly what I needed, thank you
Sep 22, 2016 -
Re: The Evanescence of Bells
Hello! You said their were a few minor mistakes. My intention is to improve this, so if you have the time, would you mind pointing out which mistakes I made? ...
Sep 22, 2016 -
Re: The Evanescence of Bells
haha, you're sweet
Sep 21, 2016 - Re: the Doppler effect Sep 21, 2016
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Re: porcelain
hi love. if your poetry is a theatrical performance, this is the show-stopper. it's heart-wrenching and in the best way. definitely stay tuned for review
Sep 18, 2016 -
Re: Wherein the Heart Stops Beating
Thank you so much.
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: The Republic of Thieves
I love your writing.
Jul 5, 2016 -
Re: Zero Hour
I have an issue with flow in my writing too (I have too many things that I want to cram in to my sentences), so I know exactly how you ...
Jun 9, 2016 -
Re: a memorial to sunless evenings
This helped a lot, thank you
May 30, 2016 -
Re: no. 88
Hello. I know this isn't my poem that you decided to review, but I wanted to inform you that capitalization in poetry is a stylistic choice. There's no rule that ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: a memorial to sunless evenings
Gentle reminder
May 29, 2016 -
Re: a memorial to sunless evenings
It was more than remotely helpful :) Thanks for taking the time to write this.
May 28, 2016 -
Re: a memorial to sunless evenings
This was exactly what I needed. Thank you so much for the lovely review. (And RippleGylf was correct; I did make a reference to that novel in the poem. :) ...
May 28, 2016
