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  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Of Crabs & Buckets

    This review is awesome, muchosmuchos muchos gracias. There is no "correct" interpretation, but the way you analysed it was very close to how I intended it to be perceived. It ...

    Oct 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Whispers & Wavelengths

    this is the most beautiful thing I've read in awhile. the foreshadowing is impeccable. characterization is thorough and your clean execution of dialogue is huge in that. it's the kind ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Evanescence of Bells

    Ooh this is exactly what I needed, thank you

    Sep 22, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Evanescence of Bells

    Hello! You said their were a few minor mistakes. My intention is to improve this, so if you have the time, would you mind pointing out which mistakes I made? ...

    Sep 22, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Evanescence of Bells

    haha, you're sweet

    Sep 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the Doppler effect

    Sep 21, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: porcelain

    hi love. if your poetry is a theatrical performance, this is the show-stopper. it's heart-wrenching and in the best way. definitely stay tuned for review

    Sep 18, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wherein the Heart Stops Beating

    Thank you so much.

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Republic of Thieves

    I love your writing.

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Zero Hour

    I have an issue with flow in my writing too (I have too many things that I want to cram in to my sentences), so I know exactly how you ...

    Jun 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: a memorial to sunless evenings

    This helped a lot, thank you

    May 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: no. 88

    Hello. I know this isn't my poem that you decided to review, but I wanted to inform you that capitalization in poetry is a stylistic choice. There's no rule that ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: a memorial to sunless evenings

    Gentle reminder

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: a memorial to sunless evenings

    It was more than remotely helpful :) Thanks for taking the time to write this.

    May 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: a memorial to sunless evenings

    This was exactly what I needed. Thank you so much for the lovely review. (And RippleGylf was correct; I did make a reference to that novel in the poem. :) ...

    May 28, 2016


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