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Thanks for the compliments! At the end, she's saying that she doesn't think the event should count as the first time she met the person categorized as "you" in the ...

You're amazing. Thank you so much.

Absolutely! I'd love to.

This was quite the piece. If I have it in me later, I'll throw you a review.

Oh, and in answer to your question about that one bit. I was trying to implement foreshadowing. This isn't super evident, but the son symbolizes the part of Clyde that ...

You're honestly the best. This is so helpful. Thank you so much.

In the line about the crickets tapping at the pane, I was referring to the pane of glass sliding door that had been mentioned in the previous sentence. :) This ...

Cristiano Ronaldo here for a review, just wait a second so I can fix my hair real quick. Or flex his thigh muscles to the crowd. Or dramatize all of ...

Thank you so much.

Girl, you're a better writer than you allow yourself to admit. In fact, I'm heading over to read your new poem now. Thanks for the kind words

Thanks man

Thanks!

Thanks for voicing your opinions. You have some good points and I'll make sure to take them into account. :)

Thank you!

I like writing poetry in lowercase, but am not particularly fond of lowercase i's. To be honest, that was the only thought that really went into my capitalization. :P Thanks ...