parker-c-penne

Please comment! Yours, E.M. Millington Synge aka P. C. Penne

Sorry folks, I've put my work in the wrong catagory again! Typical! Is it possible to move it without having to post it twice?

Yes, there's something ominous about this poem- hey- it got my vote!

I liked it!

It was good. Yeah I liked it. But I think a couple of lines could be fixed, its no big deal. Well done.

Yeah I liked it. Couple of things that need to be untangled but it makes for some easy reading. Well done.

Well, too be honest, I think that the details are key to this poems overall effect. A poem is an expression so let it be one, why hide things from ...

Also, i accidentally inserted this into the "other fiction" section, and I'm going to move it ASAP!

This is a poem, a narrative style unique to most Irish poets like John Montague and Derek Mahon. The language is accesible and in most cases a story is being ...

Story is not yet completed. this is merely a prologue so please don't criticise character developement.

Hmmmm, not the most compelling read and kind of cliched. A nice story, but nothing special. Sorry!

Very insightful indeed and quite a compelling read! Keep it up, can't wait to read more