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Re: ATTILA THE HUN
Please comment! Yours, E.M. Millington Synge aka P. C. Penne
Mar 15, 2007 -
Re: Kolkata
Sorry folks, I've put my work in the wrong catagory again! Typical! Is it possible to move it without having to post it twice?
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Child
Yes, there's something ominous about this poem- hey- it got my vote!
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Dear Diary
I liked it!
Feb 18, 2007 -
Re: isn't it strange?
It was good. Yeah I liked it. But I think a couple of lines could be fixed, its no big deal. Well done.
Feb 18, 2007 -
Re: In The Dark
Yeah I liked it. Couple of things that need to be untangled but it makes for some easy reading. Well done.
Feb 18, 2007 -
Re: Silver Soldier of the Sea
Well, too be honest, I think that the details are key to this poems overall effect. A poem is an expression so let it be one, why hide things from ...
Feb 17, 2007 -
Re: Soldier
Also, i accidentally inserted this into the "other fiction" section, and I'm going to move it ASAP!
Feb 17, 2007 -
Re: Soldier
This is a poem, a narrative style unique to most Irish poets like John Montague and Derek Mahon. The language is accesible and in most cases a story is being ...
Feb 17, 2007 -
Re: Calcium Hydrogen Carbonate
Story is not yet completed. this is merely a prologue so please don't criticise character developement.
Feb 17, 2007 -
Re: First Day As A Widow
Hmmmm, not the most compelling read and kind of cliched. A nice story, but nothing special. Sorry!
Feb 16, 2007 -
Re: Inevitabilities - Chapter One
Very insightful indeed and quite a compelling read! Keep it up, can't wait to read more
Feb 16, 2007