Published March 15, 2007
Courtly to dishonour,
A fief of fond earned rye.
Hindrance to the crying fields
Where doth I heard him die.
I've seen the wildness of the Hun.
The hypocricy of his lie.
Dig deep into the dying shame.
The coroner will pry.
The green candle still burns.
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Awsome poem!
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Yours,
E.M. Millington Synge aka P. C. Penne