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I was right, then :D Good end to a crappy day, thank you for that :D

Done. The link is in the chapter above. I hope you enjoy Chapter 6 too. Thank you again, @Honora.

Once is plenty enough already :D . As always, it's very helpful and helps me keep going. I'll try to publish the next chapter today.

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Maybe it's a question of tone, and I would have gotten it with a few more chapters to read at the same time. It's your call whether to leave it ...

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Hi, I've published Chapter 5 if you're still interested. :)

Hi, Honora. Thank you for another helpful review. Don't apologize. I'll do rewrites on this chapter whenever I've got time. Until next time.

You should try putting it in manga form. SERIOUSLY. If I could draw a straight line, that's what I would do. Such an interesting form of story-telling...And some stories just ...

You're welcome. As I said, I'll try to drop by to comment the rest. Tell me when you publish a chapter, ok? Good luck.

Weird's fine. I'm not winning any price for normalcy either. Good luck on the writing. PS: if you don't mind my asking, how old are you?

Weird's fine. I'm not winning any price for normalcy either. Good luck on the writing. PS: if you don't mind my asking, how old are you?

I'm glad you liked it. You're right, "lose" was a typo, I'll make the correction as soon as I've got the time, and I need to re-read the previous chapters ...

Thank you for the review. It's really helpful. I'll keep that in mind for the future. Hope you enjoy the rest. Have a nice week.

Thanks again. I'll take care of that ASAP.