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Hi, there. I feel like I already know your MP (I mean, I feel like I've already literally reviewed a chapter with the same MP. No judgement. Just wondering.) The ...

Hi, there. I don't know if it's much of a review, because this is going to be short. This...was a little weird for me. I was vaguely aware that the ...

Hi, I’m sorry to say I didn’t like this piece as much as the other two reviewers. Sorry. I hope you know this is meant as constructive critic. I’m not ...

Hi. This was a good chapter. You paint a very vivid picture. These creatures felt almost real to me. In fact, it kind of reminded me of the detailed account ...

Hi, HunnyBunny, I really liked this short story, but I was a little confused at the end, especially after I read the other review and realized I hadn’t understood it ...

Hi, Mea. I probably won’t drop back for another review, although I really liked this chapter. It’s more to do with the literary genre than with your writing style. I ...

Hi, Pearle. My name is Papillote, I’m dropping by to review your first chapter. First off, I would like to congratulate you on the subject matter you chose. I would ...

Hi, Morgan. Welcome back. I’m jumping in with the third chapter, which is always a risky proposition. Since I find it soooo annoying when people jump in mid-story and complain ...

Hi, Elinor. I really enjoyed this short story and could totally relate to Karen being sad about moving away to Los Angeles, about her feelings for her parents and brother, ...

Hi, @Blairwood. Ahhhhhhhh, a fan-story, that brings me back…It’s pretty damn cute too. I think it would be even better if you told it with original characters and a couple ...

Hi, my name is Papillote. I’m here to review your chapter. I’ll try to offer constructive critic. Please, take it in the spirit it’s given. My overall impression of this ...

Hi, Papillote here, still on duty and back for a review. This is supposed to be constructive critic so, please, don’t take any of the following too badly. I’m only ...

Hi, Sivershade797, my name is Papillote. I’m here to review. It’s supposed to be constructive critic, and I’m going to do my best, so please, don’t take anything I write ...

Hi, Anma. My name is Papillote, I’m going to review your first chapter. It’s supposed to be a constructive critic of your work, so please, don’t take anything I write ...

Yay, a new instalment! Stop teasing us with the true story of what happened to Marisol. I'd really like to know what really happened - it was so annoying when ...