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I really loved it. I could imagine a little soldier doing this. It sucks that your dad is like that but I guess he's trying to make you a stronger ...

Okay I'm sorry to say but I saw the ending coming. It was so sweet so I guessed something twisted was coming up. I mean, it can't all be about ...

Rather pissed aren't we? Haha, well this is the poem of the decade, what's on everybody's minds know when you think about it. I'm pleased that you kept the pattern ...

Okay this is rather humorous. This is what we all think after heart break, but we never listen. Stupid heart always jumps forward. I think it's rather a cliche poem, ...

I do absolutely love it. The lack of structure really draws me to the poem. However the 'falling to pieces' is very cliche. I mean, there is a lot of ...

I feel bad because I'm technically a stalker (my stalkee knows who I am though) and this poem is serious, but funny. I loved the last stanza. The first one ...

I love the imagery of it, but I don't find this poem creepy or scary. In fact, it was just an ode. Sorry, but if it was creepiness you wanted ...

Haha, feels like I'm in a critical mood lately. I actually do like the poem. (The name should change though, it bugs me now that I read the poem.) I ...

First: CAPITALIZATION, GRAMMAR, AND SPELLING!!!

I don't see anything to change but the die to dies thing, other than a few personal changes. I absolutely love this. This poem is absoluetly great and can relate ...

I don't know what I think. I'm so confused right now, so I'm not quite sure what to say. I like it, I really do. You let the reader draw ...

It's rather interesting to me. I love the flow of it and the description was very good. I like that it was a "dark" theme, but really what is "dark"? ...

For a first poem it is actually pretty good. I remember my first was a variation of "Roses are red, Violets are blue." Anyway, the poem doesn't have that certain ...

It is a good topic to write a poem about, however it can throw you off with the lack of punctuation. It flows very well, perfectly with the rhymes, however ...

It's rather interesting, to say the least. It is true and it is horrible, but my opinion is that it can also be beneficial. However for this poem, it is ...