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It is very moving. I liked how you used the concept of colour blindness to show the way that the past distorts your vision. It is very true. When people ...

I'm a bit twisted, but I love this poem. Part of me wanted to look away, but the part of me that liked it read it again. I liked your ...

Short, sweet and to the point. I read a bit in depth on this and it made me a bit sad reading it. It tells me about loneliness and how ...

It went way too fast. I didn't see the story behind it very well. Actually, I saw the beginning of one, but then you went to the ending. What about ...

Hi! I hope you're having a nice day because I believe I might ruin that now. I am not a Christian, honestly, but I do feel this way about my ...

This is a very interesting poem. I really liked the flow of it and I could tell the pain it took to write that. I like the structure of the ...

This sounds cruel, but it sounds rather boring. It's lacking that flavor or substance to a poem. I agree with the first reviewer; it's too short. I would add more ...

Man, this was actually pretty good! I think you edited it before I read it, and there were no problems with reading it, at least for me. I liked that ...

Wow. Just whoa. This poem is completely beautiful, and I don't say this lightly. This points out what I am feeling, and I actually felt some fear in my stomach. ...

Wow! This is really interesting. It is not simple at all in my opinion, but very easy to see. I thought I would see a lot more anger in this, ...

I absolutely enjoyed reading this. The imagery was wonderful and I can imagine my friends and I doing this while camping. I hate punctuation, and it's not necessary in this ...

It's a bit dull. I agree with LiesOnLies. I would have liked it if you would have expanded on it all instead of that repitition. Sometimes it's good to use ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this poem. The imagery was rather magnificent. However, what drew me away was the fact that there was little punctuation and capatilization. Here's my edit ...

Very interesting and original. I also love the comparison. Though I'm not sure how your friemds could be slain during love, but I can imagine it. I love the last ...

It's interesting. It just doesn't follow a journal format. He wouldn't know beforehand that the end of the world was coming. If it already happened then he would have stated ...