paintingtherain97

This poem explains exactly why I'm agnostic. Lol. There were a few spelling mistakes and everything, but I liked the meaning of the poem. It was a bit ranty and ...

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This is good. I like the message of it, and though the rhyme scheme is slightly irregular, the overall rhythm isn't all that bad. Overall, this is good, and I ...

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I'll work on it.

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I love this! I like how you describe yourself as the ice ream and the fruits as life experiences, sweet and sour. That's creative. I didn't see anything grammar-wise but ...

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Thanks for the reviews. I'll work on it. Sorry if the rhymes were sort of forced. I'm new at this. Lol demoness. I just like reviewing and don't have a ...

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I like this. It's really blunt and honest and emotional and raw. The syllables are balanced and it isn't too lengthy or anything. I hope you keep writing. This is ...

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Wow! I love this. There were a few little grammar things you should probably edit, but the story is good so far. I hope you write more of it. I ...