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  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Prey of the World

    I fixed it. Something went really wrong when I first posted it.

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Prey of the World

    I'm glad you enjoyed it, but something has gone wrong and much of my poem seems to have been cut off.

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Stalled Out

    Thank you very much. It means a lot to know you enjoyed it.

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Harsh Emptiness

    Thank you. I find this review very inspiring for me to continue writing. Also I am glad that you can relate to it, even of its not a subject most ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: A Poem for the Old

    It's dark and comical. I love that in poetry, it shows how we all think of even the sad things as being intriguing or find them funny. It flows very ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Harsh Emptiness

    Thank you for the review. Also just a tiny snippet of history, which I may edit the poem to elaborate more on now, in Rome during the time of the ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Just a Drop of Ink

    Thanky you, I actually wrote this poem quite some time ago. I really appreciate your views and your critics. Yes the poem was about harming others with my own words. ...

    Feb 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Just a Drop of Ink

    Thank you. I don't think I ever read my own words to think that way. I wrote that line as the voice telling me to stop before my words injured ...

    Feb 13, 2015


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