oneeyedunicornhunter

It looks like this was double-posted. I suppose you know how to delete a post? Just thought I'd post that before I give feedback on what you wrote.

I like Poe too, but that's not going to stop me from insulting him in my parody. >=) As for the grade, my teacher thought it was great. She read ...

Just a little disclaimer, and I hope this doesn't count as bumping. :shock: I like Dr. Who as well, I just thought it would be funny if Shakespeare didn't. :wink: ...

Thanks for your input, thedelphinator. I think I was trying to keep the pace fast so that the jokes weren't spread far out, and that may have just made it ...

Just so everyone knows, the word count is now 1,684...I'm just going to post my progress on Adv. Critiques once I have 5000. Until then, feel free to tell me ...

Please read the rules, LOSTie...you are supposed to have 2 reviews for each work you post. You have no reviews, and it appears this isn't your only work posted here.

Mistress of Dragons...besides having mediocre plot and character development, every other chapter had a sex scene. It's not as great as it sounds...dragon raping woman? -.-' Please, Weis, find somethi

It doesn't seem like you will get many reviews in the first place. Unfortunately, many people don't realize (or pretend not to realize) that the two reviews per story rule ...

Hmmm...mysterious, and yet it has a nice resolution (if death can be called "nice"). I have to go now, but i will elaborate when i come back in a few ...

This was a decent poem. The part i liked best about it is obviously how I can relate to it. The ideas were expressed well, but structure and flow could ...

8) This thought has occurred to others as well, Demeter. It's a mystery that will never be solved.

I have no idea what this is or why you posted it. I think you should delete it. Hopefully I'm not being too harsh, but YWS isn't for junk like ...

To your question about whether or not anyone got it yet, the answer is no. Great guesses so far, and all on the right track. Eimear seems to be the ...

On your request, GryphonFledgling, I have explained my religious beliefs in more detail. I also decided to go more into my vegetarianism. I think you'll find my logic very convincing... ...

rhyming kills this poem. It makes it feel contrived and forced--focus on emotion first. I'd recommend you try free verse until you find your 'voice'--then you can go back to ...