oneeyedunicornhunter

First off, I'd like to say that your signature is great...'specially 'cause it's true. :-P The poem was vague, and that leaves it very open for personal interpretation. I'm not ...

It's sad that some schools really can't afford to spend time to help smooth over in-school rivalries or stop bullying, and it's even sadder when they have a staff that ...

Well when i saw the title, i thought "that sounds random...CLICK IT!" I wasn't expecting anything so deep. The tone of sadness was never lost, but with the camels and ...

Pattycakes is right, you need to italicize the flashbacks. I was unsure for half of the story if Cormac was a guy or a girl. :-P As for the story, ...

It seemed like you were seperating the sentences into different lines at random points...for example, the first four lines: "The daemon claws at the closed door, Gurgling noises escaping from ...

I saw the title and subtitle and said, "Riding asteroids? I gotta read this!" The humor was great, and I was interested almost immediately. It seemed like you thought out ...

Hahaha! Very original. Loved the ending especially, but you mistyped "constructed". I'm not quite sure what some of it means...the second stanza's meaning was completely lost on me, for example. ...

Hmmm. Yes, I must concur, this poem is abstract. It flowed nicely, didn't waste time elaborating(as SOME people are known to do on YWS...won't mention any names, you all know ...

Interesting thoughts, and I agree for the most part. People write what they know, the new things they experience and ideas they think are all their own. To some people, ...

Hooray! I'm the first male to post a comment. Don't know why I'm so excited about it, it happens all the time. And has anyone noticed that guys on this ...

haha! Very humorous and definitely quite cheeky. It's actually a very good thing you break the rules, because sometimes rules inhibit great ideas. Besides, rules were made to be broken. ...

Hmmm...I'm reminded of Dragonriders of Pern. How were the anesthetics administered? Surely a needle wouldn't penetrate the tough hide of a dragon! I haven't read any of the other ones, ...

This seems more like private strings of thought and reflections than a non-fiction. perhaps this could be moved to somewhere more appropriate. Especially the series of questions at the end. ...

enzoguy15, please don't just copy someone else's response. As for the article, "Talent and hard work are what normally feed and clothe you." Change the 'you' to 'most people'. As ...

This was really good, but I would leave the explanation out at the end. By the time I reread it, I had already understood what you were writing about. I ...