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Um, I think she's gone, therefore we can close this thread maybe?

Thanks for the comments! yoyo- I fixed the type-o I had in there, its supposed to be a play on "dot my i's and cross my t's" with i's being ...

It was ok, a little confusing and a bit too repetitive (why did you have to say "did I mention people stare"? It didn't add anything to the poem). It ...

Nice My Favorite Highway quote (they live in my town =P) but I will also have to ask you to space it out please.

Ummm....traffic lights? Its a lame guess but it's all I got at the moment, my brain is kind of mush from algebra.

I was trying to kind of make it seem like the laughter was the glittering gemstone that shattered the silence, but clearly if I need to explain that I need ...

Thanks for the feedback! I cleaned it up a bit, and changed the ending...any more comments? Cade: Isn't Juno the best movie??

^ I thought everyone knew that. I was saying that that's what this poem reminded me of. Perhaps I wasn't clear....

Haiku's are easy But sometimes they don't make sense Refrigerator =D

Thanks for the input everyone! I cleaned it up a little, hopefully that fixes a few things.

THE KINKS. BILLY JOEL. Oh Cal, your taste in music is beyond superb

Simon and Garfunkle? Bright Eyes? The Decemberists???? Yes!!!!

I added a few periods to hopefully clear it up a little bit, but what i was really going for was a piece that just had image after image that ...