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Thank you, Watcha (love the name)!! That was a great critique that I find really helpful and useful. I would definitely come back and read it when I'm writing and ...

Thank you so much, Plume!! This was super helpful. I was not (at all!) trying to make this naturalistic, and it was supposed to be hardcore nonsense. The whole detective ...

Spooky...

Hey, I didn%u2019t mean it to come out that way at all. It%u2019s hard to understand the tone of a comment because you can%u2019t see how the person tried to ...

Thank you, Abdu! All of this really helps. :)

Thank you Kathryn! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it. :D

Oh, I get it now, thank you!!

Hey Delphine!! I really want to improve this scene but I%u2019m not sure I understand your suggestions. Did you mean it%u2019s not clear enough Jam is talking to himself, or ...

Thanks, Vil. This was helpful. :)

All of this really helped, thank you!

That's an amazing, inspiring work. You're so talented!

Yeah, COVID isn't the best. :/ I'm more of a home-person so quarantine is personally easier for me than for others, but I can totally relate and understand the feeling ...

Wow! Had such a great time reading it!

Hey there! I really like this, and I'm usually not very interested in poetry. I just want to say grades are not everything. School is hard . Not always because ...