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Oh how frustrating! A really good piece that my fellow instructors have jumped all over first so I can't review it properly without repeating what they've said! Gutted! But anyway, ...

Very nice chapter three but I have to say I do frefer chapter 3... everything i would have otherwise picked up on hs ben covered so kudos to the other ...

Hey Really liked chapter 2...preferred it to chapter one but I did find one typing error that noone else seems to have picked up on! Ann and the other girl ...

Hey! Really liked this chapter. It really hooked me...got me captivated some might say... There's nothing particularly to critique because it seems grammatically sound and stuff...nothing particularly

Hey thevoiceinside! I have to say i really enjoyed reading this, thoght I think i'd much prefer hearing it since it has a song! You can't judge the rhyme or ...

Hey! “Wake up, Miss Smith.” The house help knocked on her door. “Five more minutes,” she groaned turning as the house help knocked the door again. “Miss Smith, it’s almost ...

You can rant via poetry if you so should wish my dear! I do agree that maybe you could double some of the lines up so there are words on ...

Lol, don't you dare tone down the "verbage"! Each to their own, I understand that but personally, every now and again I like to read a piece of writing with ...

Hmmmmm I don't know what Twilight is, but everyone keeps going on about it! If anyone can fill me in and satisfy my curiosity I'd be most grateful! The only ...

I think this appeals to the older ones of us on here who have experienced adult relationships, hence some of the disrespect to them of course! They have it all ...

Wow what an odd actually made me laugh! I can understand about some people possibly getting offended but noe, and that's good since I'm reviewing it, I suppose! Anyway, here ...

I tell you what, give me an overview of what is yet to come as I really don't have a clue and I'll see what I can come up with ...

That was truly disgusting yet completely captivating. In terms of true literary comments there really isn't much to say in terms of criticism. It's far too good for that even ...

Hey Happy! What a fantastic story! I'm really looking forward to reading more of it. I didn't see anything that needs to be changed in my humble opinion so I'm ...

Hey Snoink! This is a really powerful piece and very gripping to read. I think it's the right length as well. To be honest, there is nothing at all i ...