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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter3 (BÖÐÚLFUR’S P.O.V)

    Takk fyrir. Thank you for the review. It's very helpful and I tried to make this dystopian book different from the rest of them. Read the other chapters if you ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Other Re: Red & Blue

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    I love it. This is an amazing poem that is very true that anyone in the Trans community would love. I think you did great on this poem. There really ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: The Mean Spirited Leper Gives Me a Green Leather Jacket

    It is a good poem. It's just I can't tell if you are criticizing America, Russia, Kindness, or Humanity or if you're doing any of those. I liked it but ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Horror Re: Oblivious Heaven

    So this is about an Icelandic witch trail and with trials in general. The oblivious Heaven is because they were all innocent but, why didn't god protect them? Why were ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Horror Re: Oblivious Heaven

    That is good because I have so much trouble with English already. It's not my first language.

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Horror Re: My Salvation

    Takk fyrir. Thank you so much for the review. Please leave a like if you liked it and the Darkly thing was really something that just happened in the heat ...

    Jul 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Horror Re: My Salvation

    Buonsera! Grazie! Takk fyrir. Thank you so much for the review and please leave a like. You're the first person on here that I've meet that speaks Italian

    Jul 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter3 (BÖÐÚLFUR’S P.O.V)

    The reason for rating it what I did is because I need beta readers of all ages to see who will like it or not

    Jul 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Other Re: Chapter 2 of Headders

    Thanks for the feedback it was helpful. I'm glad you liked.

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Other Re: Chapter 2 of Headders

    Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it and this helped me a lot.

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, Narrative Re: An Explosion

    It was a good essay. I liked The last line "On the first day, my heart will explode." It is a good ending. And there was a spelling error in ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: ​Muster Heroes – Quicksave 18

    You need to slow down just a little because there is so much happening that I can't keep up. It feels like you are trying to rush the story but ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Death of the dream

    your welcome

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Death of the dream

    Hi... So I think there should be quotation marks. You shouldn't have the coma in the sentence "Have you been crying, For all night?". It looks weird too. I think ...

    Apr 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Nine)

    I have nothing bad to say that is bad. It is absolutely hands down the best thing I've read tonight. I can't wait to read the next ones bye. The ...

    Apr 4, 2016


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