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Re: Strange love
Hullo dear :) Thank you for replying to my thread, I hope you find my review helpful. So, let’s get started, shall we? It was a great feeling. Love, an ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(11)
Hey Rascalover! I’m terribly sorry for the wait, it’s been a crazy week, and this slipped my mind. My greatest apologies, and I’ll do my best to give an extremely ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Words of a Conceited Man
Hullo dear! I’m octocoffee, pleased to make your acquaintance. Your poem caught my eye, and I’m here to offer my comments. Why, hello, dear gents and ladies, I would switch ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero
Hey Pretty Crazy! I’m octo, and I’m going to review your piece today. I hope you don’t mind, and find some things in here that help you out. NOTE: This ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Some short poems (Edited)
Hey roon! Thanks for replying to my thread! If you have any problems with anything I’ve said (if I’m unclear or offensive), don’t hesitate to tell me :) Anyway, let’s ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Can't Tell Daddy
Hey Rachel! I'm here to review this piece. I tend to get very wordy, so forgive the length. And now I spoke of another harangue, once again finding myself sitting ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Why Do Hospitals Smell Funny?
Hey! Thanks for replying to my thread. I hope you find things in here that help out a bit. So, let’s begin. Why do hospitals smell funny? I wonder. I ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Another Day
Hey! Sorry for the wait, but I'm here now :) So, let's get started. I'm not very experienced with reviewing lyrics, but here's what I can scrounge together. To start ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: .
Hey Rosey! I’m here and ready to review. I ran up the steps, pulling an arrow from my quiver as I went. What an exciting introduction! It’s excellent, grabbing my ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Voices
Hey, Kath! I’m assuming that’s your name from your signature. I’m octocoffee, nice to meet you! I’m sure you already know, but you might need a reminder: The 2:1 ratio! ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Heaven Soaked Harmony
Lane after lane, of the same blue tent; positioned securely, tied to the ground. The thick blue air bed, Fills each waterproof head. The same white guide wires, Tie it ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: waves
Hey silented1! Hope you don’t mind if I go over this. Well, you asked for more reviews, so I’m happy to help out. If you liked the way I reviewed ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Black Stone Inn (working title)
Hi ButterflyInk! I love your username, I think it’s very pretty. Thank you for replying to my thread, I hope you find this useful. Bickazer has already covered the bases, ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: All or None
First of all, I think your poem would really benefit from punctuation. I recently read this fantastic article (because I tend to do the same thing when I attempt poetry) ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Pain Insane
Hi KayWurdz! I’m octo, nice to meet you. Just to start off, I like the title for this poem. It’s quirky and interesting. So now let’s dive into the actual ...
Jul 21, 2009
