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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Strange love

    Hullo dear :) Thank you for replying to my thread, I hope you find my review helpful. So, let’s get started, shall we? It was a great feeling. Love, an ...

    Aug 11, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(11)

    Hey Rascalover! I’m terribly sorry for the wait, it’s been a crazy week, and this slipped my mind. My greatest apologies, and I’ll do my best to give an extremely ...

    Aug 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words of a Conceited Man

    Hullo dear! I’m octocoffee, pleased to make your acquaintance. Your poem caught my eye, and I’m here to offer my comments. Why, hello, dear gents and ladies, I would switch ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mission Zero

    Hey Pretty Crazy! I’m octo, and I’m going to review your piece today. I hope you don’t mind, and find some things in here that help you out. NOTE: This ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Some short poems (Edited)

    Hey roon! Thanks for replying to my thread! If you have any problems with anything I’ve said (if I’m unclear or offensive), don’t hesitate to tell me :) Anyway, let’s ...

    Jul 31, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Can't Tell Daddy

    Hey Rachel! I'm here to review this piece. I tend to get very wordy, so forgive the length. And now I spoke of another harangue, once again finding myself sitting ...

    Jul 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why Do Hospitals Smell Funny?

    Hey! Thanks for replying to my thread. I hope you find things in here that help out a bit. So, let’s begin. Why do hospitals smell funny? I wonder. I ...

    Jul 30, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Another Day

    Hey! Sorry for the wait, but I'm here now :) So, let's get started. I'm not very experienced with reviewing lyrics, but here's what I can scrounge together. To start ...

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: .

    Hey Rosey! I’m here and ready to review. I ran up the steps, pulling an arrow from my quiver as I went. What an exciting introduction! It’s excellent, grabbing my ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Voices

    Hey, Kath! I’m assuming that’s your name from your signature. I’m octocoffee, nice to meet you! I’m sure you already know, but you might need a reminder: The 2:1 ratio! ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Heaven Soaked Harmony

    Lane after lane, of the same blue tent; positioned securely, tied to the ground. The thick blue air bed, Fills each waterproof head. The same white guide wires, Tie it ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: waves

    Hey silented1! Hope you don’t mind if I go over this. Well, you asked for more reviews, so I’m happy to help out. If you liked the way I reviewed ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Black Stone Inn (working title)

    Hi ButterflyInk! I love your username, I think it’s very pretty. Thank you for replying to my thread, I hope you find this useful. Bickazer has already covered the bases, ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All or None

    First of all, I think your poem would really benefit from punctuation. I recently read this fantastic article (because I tend to do the same thing when I attempt poetry) ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Pain Insane

    Hi KayWurdz! I’m octo, nice to meet you. Just to start off, I like the title for this poem. It’s quirky and interesting. So now let’s dive into the actual ...

    Jul 21, 2009


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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