oceans

Hello Arcticus! This is a lovely poem. You seem very experienced. I love how it sounds. It reminds me of older poems/books, old rhymes. The Tale of Peter Rabbit came ...

Hi sound! This was a really cool poem, it was fun to jump on and see that there were so many chicken poems. The title made me laugh but your ...

Hi, Mellifera! This story is very entertaining, intense and a pleasure to read. I love your choice of title, it is very intriguing. I really enjoy your use of language ...

Hi, IamI! Your poem is very well written, I enjoyed reading it! I love your use of language. The idea is very scary, the direction society is pointing in. But ...

Hello Shadeflame! I happened across your poem and I really enjoyed it. I have always had a fascination with space. I love stargazing, I loved learning about the planets in ...

Hi Morrigan! Your poem is very creative. I think its very cool that you compare the person to a house. When you think about it, we are very similar (as ...

Hi Via! I really like your poem, the imagery is beautiful. I have always been obsessed with the ocean and what goes beyond it, what lies underneath it. Isn't it ...

Hi JesseWrites! Your poem about domestic abuse was written really well, transporting the reader to scenes in which they can feel the tension and fear that the victim felt. This ...

Hi Silverquill12! I think your piece is very creative, inspirational, and thought-provoking. From the hints through the messages, the receiver obviously has some sort of mental illness and has a ...

Hi Gravitem! Your poem seems to come straight from the heart, and that is a very good thing. I think, as artists (in every sense of the word), that we ...