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Well. I did not understand anything, but it was definately a unique writing. I did get that there was a person involved, though. I love big words, and you used ...

When the deer was imploding it reminded me of that movie called the Pet Detective or something with Ace Ventura coming out of the rhino's butt. This didn't scare me, ...

You do have freedom of speech.

Thank you. As long as it sends a message, which I was hoping for-- and it does.

Personally I don't believe that no one can be perfect, but thank you for the advice.

I don't mind critics, since I am one and everything, but I don't think you really know WHO I'm talking about. I prefer not to give away the whole nature ...

Thanks. No one has ever reviewed my poem like you have, its so nice of you!

Thanks for the review. Just to let you know 'home' doesn't mean the common household here, but heaven. So I'm actually saying 'I want to go to heaven."

I don't feel like writing a review, I'm all out of my perky energy to, so I'll just comment on how I can totally 'get' what this is like, if ...

I thought it would be a little confusing there, where the three other people (two on either side of the MC and one across, like a circle) are looking down-- ...

I purposely put those commas there; it made sense in my criteria at least. But thanks for the positive critique.

Finally, a simple poem that makes sense. I have to correct you on this part, the last line should not have a comma, I think. Where it says "But when ...

Great story, Maggie. I hope you continue with this idea, I can't wait to read what will happen next! The two friends act almost alike, which is a little redundant. ...

I want to hear more about the rose, like where did it come from, who put it there, and such. I don't like romance stories very much, but the mystery ...

First of all, hello. I'm wondering if you were trying to make Chloe seem as though she talks either like a little kid, or with an odd dialect, because its ...