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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stream

    Hello! This is notresponsible here to review. First off, this story is interesting. It brings so many questions to mind like, "Who are the faces? Are they apart of his ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Boss In Boots

    Hello This is notresponsibe here to review. First off, welcome to YWS! Now on to your story. That was very unexpected but the delivery was great! It seems like the ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: The Battle. Chapter 1.

    Hello Notresponsible here to review your novel. I like the plot of the story but I felt like it was rushed. She says she was fighting and she is a ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: A Hero's Welcome - Prologue

    Notresponsible here to write a review. I figured since you critique my stories you know how to write a good story yourself so I decided to look up your work. ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fire and Water

    Hello notresponsible here to reviewing your story. Sorry for the late response. First off i would like to say that I liked the way the story was written. It's not ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 1 - Traveler's Tavern Is a Riot

    Hello It's notresponsibe, First i would like to apologize for jumping into your story a little late (better late than never I guess). After I send in this review i ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hero

    Hello this is not responsible here to review (I apologize for any errors in my review) I love this poem. My mother is also a hero of mine. You did ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: Fat, Rolls and Cellulite.

    Hello! Notresponsible Here to review your poem! I agree! Every single girl is beautiful! It is also a fact that most guys like a woman with some meat on her ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Politics Re: The children who brought anarchy, destruction, and freedom: Prolog

    Hello this is notresponsible sending in a review! Your idea of a story about children creating anarchy leaves a few questions to be answered. Questions like: How old are they? ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The World (a 5-7-5 poem)

    I suppose I'll leave a review myself. First off, I posted a piece similar to this poem ( it is the message that I feel is similar). It's like you ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: The Story Of My Mind

    I like the way you was explaining how great your story will be and how your character will be developed. The main thing I would like to see is the ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Script » Theatre, Humor Re: Mr. Homoh Hernaldez

    That was a very funny play but i was confused about the time. The term gay has meant homosexual for a long time. Otherwise the plot was hilarious! I assumed ...

    May 16, 2014


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