notmaria

Ooh, I already love Ember. I can't wait to figure out more about Ember and the 'darkness' that the royals are capable of. There's this part near the beginning that ...

This is excellent! I really love dark fantasy with complex characters and pretty writing, and you've fulfilled all of those! I don't actually have a lot of critiques. I know ...

I really liked this! There is definitely some room for improvement, but it's a great start. I love the title, and how you tied colors into each stanza. I would ...

Hello! I really love this. It's short, simple, and I know how hard it is to write something this short. :) Best of all, it was actually funny! I have ...

Hello! I cannot even begin to tell you how beautiful this is. When I first read the title, I immediately went "I hope this is a poem about the god, ...

Hey, kiddo. I cannot say enough about this!! I loved it so much, and everything was done so well. I especially appreciated how you made the linguistics realistic, without going ...

Hello! I absolutely love this poem!! I like the first few lines, but the fifth line doesn't really make sense to me. Besides being repetitive in conjunction with the following ...

I love this poem! The first stanza is great, and I loved the personification of Growth throughout the poem. There are a couple things that I think might improve the ...