noridori

I'd definitely read this. It kind of reminds me of 'they both die at the end', but still a very unique concept. I look forward to reading the rest the ...

i've been hesitant to review poetry but your short description drew me in, and luckily so! this is a great piece. thankfully i've been blessed by a bunch of amazing ...

thank you! i'm so glad you enjoyed it and are interested in the rest of the story. i'll try to not let you down!

oooh i'll definitely be keeping an eye out then...

woah… this is probably one of my favorite pieces i’ve read on YWS so far if i’m being honest. the opening was really strong imo and i loved this set ...

i might have replied to the wrong comment haha anyway this is just a prologue :)

aww thank you! that might be the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me lol i'm so glad you liked it

no worries at all

Thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D

aww thank you so much i'm so glad i could help, i genuinely enjoyed your piece and i'd love to review more of your work in the future!