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And now the edit option is gone??!!

Ignore it's current state. I tried to edit it on my school computer which doesn't like the editor. I shall fix it in the afternoon.

Of course word wouldn't point them out as spelling mistakes. The original words come through as real words, though they do not fit grammatically.

This is not a review. I have so far enjoyed your story and would like to read more. :D

As well as the italics. *bangs head on the keyboard of my crazy computer which hates BBCode.*

Sorry about the small-caps function messing up.

It makes me all warm and fuzzy when my reviews help.

I can't wait 'till the points system is back up because it will force you to review to post your own works. Unfortunately because while the points system is down, ...

I don't know whether or not I have the jurisdictional to say this, but until Nate puts in a new thread for art and photography in the Browse section, art ...

One general review coming up. Please turn your eyes away if you dislike harsh reviews to the point where you would leave YWS if you got one. Nothing here is ...

Thank you for all the reviews. I'll try to get around to returning the favour.

Thank you for the review. I've taken these things in to mind and have done a bit of editing.

I'll leave it up to you to decide how fictitious it is.

Slightly ingenious yet headache causing. I may or may not stop being lazy and actually review this.

Thanks Snoink. This will really help when I do a round of editing. I knew there was a gaping plot whole somewhere, but I just couldn't find it.