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Thank you for your review! I really appreciate it and think that adding some poetry would be a great idea! I hope you enjoyed it c:

Thank you for your review and I'm glad you enjoyed (: This Mrs. Bridge is based off a real teacher of mine who does talk like that and calls us ...

I thought you did a good job with your meter, for the most part; however, "Tapered thin" is a little rough, but hardly. It has a very nice melody to ...

Thank you for your review! I will take your suggestions into consideration when editing this poem; however, cursing doesn't ruin lines of poetry. In fact, it enriches it - when ...

I'm glad it does (: and thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Thank you for your review! And I suppose I could, but the mind set of man isn't particularly what I was going for, although it is a good suggestion. The ...

thank you :') haha I'm really glad you enjoyed it

it was initially "teat", but I accidentally spell checked it and forgot about it. Anyway, I like the idea of being less crude, and will revise it!

Thank you for taking the time to review this! I agree it's kind of a weird line, but changing it to Dragon riders isn't conveying what I'd like it too, ...

Haha it's okay I'm just glad you enjoyed it (:

Thank you for taking time to read this :)

Thank you a lot

Thank you (:

Thank you for your kind words towards my meter use haha :3 As for the second line, I think it goes nicely with how I wrote it, but we all ...