nmgreenslade

This was great. I loved the ending and I really can't wait to read more. So many questions unanswered but that is a good thing because that gets the reader ...

This was good. Creepy but I liked it. I think instead of having your writing all in one big clump I would have it in paragraphs but overall it was ...

This is definitely as amazing as your last chapter! The description is great and is really detailed; you have me hooked once again. I honestly can't see anything wrong with ...

Wow! I loved it. You had me hooked the whole way through. Your use of description helped create a clear image in my head of what the character was going ...

Loved it! The description is really detailed and it was easy to read. Your writing really does flow. The way you developed your characters helped create a clear picture in ...