nishkarsha

Oh! Such a great piece you've written. I fell in love with your first line "If this isn't all a dream, i'll leave you kisses in the snow" every stanza ...

such a great piece. i really loved it... except a line "will your heart disappear like the flesh on your bones" i didn't get what are you trying to tell ...

Short and very creative writing. The separation was very well executed and then at last there i think is the happy ending. Missing someone is tragic and you've ended so ...

Hey, thanks a lot for such appreciation. Will try to write more of these type of poems :)

Hey, really appreciate your review for the one. Yes, i will check out on my punctuation more seriously now. As i was not so serious about it. You know i ...

Thank you for the review. Yes, i will try to use your suggestion to improve my writing :)

Great piece of writing, really liked your perception about the three L's. Your poem is short and to me it completely describes about the love and learn pattern. In short ...