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Re: Music To My Ears, Pages 1-14
Last one! Since it's in the Green Room, I have to write a half-decent review. Ok. First, Melody's clothes. Ok. I get that she loves music, and that her name ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: The Official Pact Episode 3- The Official First Day
Two more reviews to go! Honestly, I'm considering giving up. You were going to post the rest anyway. Oh well. So, Jillian just kind of gets really upset out of ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: The Official Pact Episode 2- The Official Accident
HELLO So. I think the main thing that didn't really make sense was the medical part. Isabeth fell off a diving board, hit the concrete, and was unconscious for three ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: The Official Pact Episode 1- The Official Pilot
NEXT ONE. Jillian says "before the end of 8th grade." Maybe you did this on purpose, but that gives them two years. Since the pact is focused on the fact ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Listen
NEXT REVIEW. "Mrs. Wilson roles her eyes." *rolls. The other grammar error both of the people below have pointed out. I'm pretty sure I've already given you all of my ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: A Time Machine and a Bullet- SCREENPLAY
This one certainly isn't in the Green Room, but I'll give you a decent review. Ok... You didn't really explain much. What happened to her parents? What happened after she ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: "Birthday Make-over" a scene from SMILE
I can't believe I'm doing this. I have school tomorrow! I can't stay up all night reviewing your work! *sigh* here goes... How am I supposed to review something based ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: Chemistry
WOO-HOO! Science. :D This is something I've thought about for a long, long time. How everything is really the same. When it comes down to it, everything is made up ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Of Expectations and Fluctuations - Chapter 1
Overall, I really liked this. A few things to note: 1. There isn't much of a point in mentioning this, since I see that all the other reviews say the ...
Jun 29, 2013
