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Re: how to save a life: start of something different
Hello! Okay I noticed a couple of things, watch your spelling and grammar. Proofread your work before you sumbit. You had a couple of added words in there and I ...
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: Yours Truly
thank you! i love poems with some type of ryhme... any suggestions? and same with the vocab , and potry books . which ones should i try? thank you :D
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: The Dance of Sins
lol... sorry i really i really loved it :D
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: Your Name in Stars
this was very good. as said before you did use "last night" alot.
Jul 7, 2007 -
Re: The Dance of Sins
If that's how you write when your bored than forget your life and write.... Woot for boredom! I'm not quite sure if its a poem... .but then again I assume ...
Jul 7, 2007 -
Re: The Meaning of Life
This was pretty good... but it wasnt flowing.... :cry: try to center around that and keeping the point very clear
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: Just one girl.
It was a great poem just really I don't feel it was strong enough or maybe if you wrote it a little longer it may have become a little stronger....
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Unknown Story Chap. 4 part 1
hey.... awesome work! i love it..... keep writing :D
Jun 19, 2007