netherling451

If you're looking for opinions, then I, personally, would choose the haiku over the poem (not that they both aren't very well done). I like the simplicity of it and ...

When I first saw the title, I will admit I thought "HARRY POTTER FANFIC!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!" But no. It was not to be. Is this about love lost? That is how ...

What to say about something so blatantly obvious but also subtle in ways? For starters, your concept is interesting and not something that many people could comfortably approach as you've ...

... First of all, I recommend you talk to someone. And I mean that in the most caring way possible. That being said, I can't call your work beautiful as ...

I want to say that I had an epiphany after reading your play, but that isn't really true. As I'm writing this review, I am still trying to decipher the ...

Oh. My. Lord. I was just moseying along poetry lane until your last stanza hit me hard. Like a veritable, five-pound brick. I had suspected that the speaker had just ...

I love the plant analogy!!!! I'm just a sucker for good analogies. Don't ask me why: I don't know. But your poem was very well written and your speaker felt ...

I will start with the negative just to get it out of the way: your writing pattern is a little off and didn't flow very well. That being said, the ...

This was really interesting and I hope to hear more about Ellie (let her and her chocolate live!!) but you seem to be switching back an forth between modern and ...

It took me a minute to regain my motor speech skills after reading this. It's very well done and seriously eery. I kept trying to guess what "I/me" was. I ...