nativecatcher

In general I really like this piece. I find it interesting although I did get confused at certain parts so I had to reread them. I'm not very good at ...

This is the cutest and most intriguing piece I have ever read. You're a really good writer. I'm a very visual person and even though there weren't many details I ...

I'm not very good with grammar or much of a grammar freak, but I did enjoy reading your story. It was magical in a way, and I couldn't stop reading ...

Thanks for posting more of the story it was very good. Your friend is a very talented writer. Your descriptions were very good, and I couldn't see anything wrong(this is ...

This story was pretty good. I usually do not like fighting,medieval, elf type stories, but I had fun reading yours. So Good job, and as the first reviewer put include ...

I liked this story, and caught my eye. I'm very curious as to whether or not Ellie and the G.E.B(Green Eyed Boy) were friends on Earth. I really enjoyed reading ...

I like this story, and although it is just a piece of the story i liked it. Although it would have been nice to have some description I'm sure I'll ...

I liked your story I thought it was pretty good. You included a lot of details so it made it easy to.....imagine what the scenes would be.I liked your characters, ...

Your story was so awesome. I could imagine the ENTIRE scenario and feel the characters, and feeling and I really want to know what happens next and who the mysterious ...

Your story caught my attention but I think you should describe the character better, and the surroundings as well. Also who is this mysterious man trying to kill Dobliv?Why does ...

I really liked your story, it was very good. Although it would have been nice to get a good description of the characters, and as the other commenter put a ...

I think your story was very interesting although I'm not sure what you meant by "I had just died after all". Did she actually die and come back to life? ...

I really like your story.Usually people do not write about mermaids often,and I like how you decided to write about something very uncommon to people. I think you should post ...

I think your story was really good, and interesting. The whole music concept was really cool, and I've never seen anything like it before. I think the title is a ...