narniafreak12

Hi! Okay. This was exciting! The whole bird having those blue-eyes and everything was crazy. However, it was rather short and didn't let me in on what the whole plot ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First off... it more or less seems like an interesting story. It's obviously a fantasy world that will have a wonderful storyline with the elves and humans. ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Alright here I go. This was a good starting point. It grabbed my attention mainly because of the boy who helped her and she doesn't know who ...

Hey! I'm Narniafreak! Welcome! Aww this story was kind of cute. I liked it. The end where their rings and blood became the stars and stuff were really cool. I ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I don't usually review fanfics but I saw Legion of Superheroes and thought cool! Anyways. When you have people talking, you'll want to start a new paragraph ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Well, the title really caught my attention. I was like Lizard Boy ? Sweet! And it was rather interesting what happened. The beginning part in italics really ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First I'd like to say that there wasn't a lot to go on for this piece. It was a bit short and I was a little confused. ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Well, this was interesting. Serena is stuck in ballet school when she wants to fight dragons... hmm.. I like that. It seems to call for a great ...

YAY! I'm soo excited for this! hah. First off, pretty good. However, I really want to know who Trent's father is. That's probably a very important aspect of the story. ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First off, the intro totally pulled me. Even the first line made me curious as to where this story would be going. So good job! =] I ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! This was sad! I did like how she just brushed off his death like it was nothing. Gives her a bit of character there. All the mentioning ...

Hi! Okay. I like it so far. I'm curious to know what Z-Ball is. It sounds fun. Also, I kind of like that he goes to a Spy Academy. It ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First, I actually liked it. At first, I didn't know what this was going to be about, but it was good! So great job! I found some ...

Hi! Hope I help. First, like you did with Chapter One I suggest putting at the top, Aaron, to indicate who's view it's in. “They’re probably just getting something from ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I hope all my comments help. How did I know it was slippery? A monkey had just fallen off… but you don’t want to hear me tell ...