napalmerski

Well, I've digested the absurdist idea, and decided to apply it to my own biblical project. This is the missing element. I wondered what I needed to make it click. ...

Hey, from this point of view, this can become an excellent absurdist piece. If after every event or word the main protagonists /or anyone else/ grits his teeth, knits his ...

Yo, Sana, as Karsten says - when it looks ready, has a site and a link for purchase - what other conclusion can one make? Plus I googled around and ...

Hihi, thanks for the feedback, Aspiring and Angels-Symphony! But I'm gonna have to make a stand here - this is exactly the way the story should start. With the protagonist ...

Researched the Lazarus legend, aparently one school of thought points to France, the other to Cyprus. Absolutely not my invention :D

Yo, thanks for the feedback AyumiGosu17 and Aspiring Author! Thanks for the detailed pointing out of various errors Aspiring, and yes, I suppose it should be 'poor souls' and 'what ...

This could be entertaining. Don't force your style - write as it comes. You say the story is already being written? Do it! :D

The uderlying theme of this play, as far as I myself can make head or tail of the outpour of barely conscious material, is structured along: a) phonetic linguistical puns ...

Yo, nice beginning, the last sentence is a bit confused,perhaps should divide it into two. Also the book on the legs - are the legs balancing the book, or is ...

Yo, Apple96, Vasticity, I'm glad the play made you laugh. As soon as I have another absurdist fit, I'll make something similar

Here it is -

Yo moonjumper thank you for your goodwill, but obviously this is not for you. Saying that it does not make much sense is like saying that there are far too ...

Thanx for the review Nate! Half a million is not the population of the city, but the example of the most populated town where he's ever been. Before. I didn't ...

deleted

Argh, no, I also liked the poem very much! A bit at cross-purposes here we are, dear Empress, I made that post as a poke at Galerius's evil style, not ...