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nancnancrevolution

  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Home At Last

    Tue Mar 12, 2019 4:26 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: relapse or not

    REVISED: 3 pounds of grey matter control you take the drink? don't take the drink? insane? sane? drink the poison? why not|why not|why not the explosion of bitter hops on ...

    Mon Mar 11, 2019 12:03 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: relapse or not

    Holy cow thanks dude %uD83D%uDE0A%uD83D%uDE0A

    Mon Mar 11, 2019 2:21 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Streeetside Sonnet

    The rhythm is what struck me and dragged me in. I like the picture it creates in my mind.

    Mon Mar 11, 2019 1:31 am
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Health Re: untitled

    It is supposed to be your. Thank you for the catch. I am not a great proof reader. haha

    Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:22 am
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Health Re: untitled

    I missed a "you" in that sentence :( I have fixed it! I didn't want to use "nay" it just came out. I am thinking of changing it to "no ...

    Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:22 am
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Health Re: untitled

    I miss the "you" in that sentence. I have since fixed it. Thanks for the means a lot!

    Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:17 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Can't We Just

    Love the punctuation and the flow of it. Short, sweet, and too the point. Keep up the good work.

    Sat Mar 19, 2016 6:37 pm
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: the girl who tries

    beautiful!

    Sat Mar 19, 2016 6:20 pm


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings