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Re: The Day I Made Everyone Hate Me
This is so odd yet humorous and clever. I liked the fact that it's only 4 lines long but it was very effective and complete regardless of it's length. Your ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Shapely
Hi there :) Firstly, I would like to congratulate you on creating such a unique poetic piece. The way you have brought in the structure as the main topic of ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Perfect Shell
This poem takes me to such a peaceful setting. The line "worn smooth by years of salty tides" was particularly beautiful, I loved the image of that in my head. ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The City of Stone
This piece would defiantly be very interesting to see in a novel. It is very nerve wracking and tense and possesses power, rich, visual imagery. I think that you should ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Our Vision of Change
This is a simple poem but heartwarming. It's truly brilliantly written. You have taken a sensitive subject that the people tend to brush off and mark unimportant and have brought ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The fill in the blank you forgot to fill
This poem made me tear up. This is excellently put together and well thought out. I also think that this is most definitely publish-worthy. I love the lines:"The silence stones ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Scroll of a Writer's Life
This is a very elegantly written poetic piece. I am very impressed with your vocabulary, you have expanded your word use way past dull and unexciting and have really made ...
Jan 9, 2014
