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thank you, and lol, go ahead and print out and stick it in a binder. I don't care as long as you don't claim it as your own.

thank you, and I am a choir student for my school so yah, music really speaks to me.

thank you, I really appreciate your advice.

thank you

thank you, I really enjoy your comments, I will definitely take into account for what you advised. :)

thank you, and I know that I put quotes around it. I normally do it with all of my poems either because they are pulled from a story I am ...

Thank you

thank you, glad that you like it. :)

thank you, I enjoy reading everyone's opinion. Actually I just wrote this today, so it's kind of like a rough draft, if I rewrite it I will consider your tip.

thank you as well, I really love your opinion and I think that the describing part in some areas can be worked on, I will definitely look into that. Glad ...

Thank you, I really tried my hardest to aim for the man to seem cruel and detached, as for what class, sorry to say it is a high school class ...

Ok, so thank you for the review, and I think I have decided to post this as the prologue, anyhow, the name thing. I totally understand were you are going ...

no problem, that's why I am here

thank you, that is what I thought after I read it a while. Thanks for pointing out the typo, glad it wasn't that many. I am also very glad that ...

thank you, that is what I thought after I read it a while. Thanks for pointing out the typo, glad it wasn't that many. I am also very glad that ...