myfreindsavamp

Ok ya get were your coming from...I just finished up the other mistakes... All good. :smt038

Awsome my freind.^_^

Ok im not going to catsh it all but i like it i ony got to read the first ch. tough. You could tell the first ch as written by ...

Um...ok the thing about it not even being a poem was to another peom that i rote over but ok I'll try not to cry.... The peoms for the crow ...

The pic up top explanes who Vickter Krum *sorry for miss spelling..* is talking about and great job.Two thumbs up! -em

I found quite a few flaws in the writing but i iked it so i have to agree with my frinds up there...^

Ok i got bored and desidedto change the whole thing so there.

*Ya a happy point!*claps yay so happy for this.....bye bye going to read the other one....*

I agree with maki chan's first review...

*ditto^*And that was sad.*

Ok ill edit this in a few min. and i think i might be able to slow down but ive already written more i'll write it up later though....

*that's sad to.

can you seperate thie paraghraphs please so i can read your story?

ditto^all of the above...

cool...