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I liked this poem so much that I can't stop reading it!

I LOVE this poem! This is FANTASTIC! All of the stuff you wrote about was so true about what the world has really come to now. This was great. Keep ...

In the whole poem you could feel how the character in the poem was feeling. I also liked that you had a rhyme scheme which made the poem flow easily. ...

I really liked your sense of imagery as well as your personification. Also, it makes you think about how the feeling of area that you are around is like. Great! ...

I liked it alot. I liked how it flow, it was flowing naturally. KEEP ON WRITING!!