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Hi Bint! This poem really sets the mood for change and keeps the ball rolling from the very first stanza. Influential and encouraging as it is, it also delves into ...

Hi Anwesha! I really like this poem. It's a story of strength and perseverance and moving on despite whatever hardship life may bring. A beautiful message interwoven in a fine ...

Hi Anna! Firstly, welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first post. This poem has great depth and truly portrays the contrasts of the two individuals, despite being in a ...

Hi wewinwelose, This piece really resonates with the message of living a better life. I love the rhyme and the transition from each rhyme scheme is seamless as each stanza ...

Hi Dogs, This is a nice simple poem and despite being of an imaginative and creative tone, is not without its share of flaws. I love the concept of neverland ...

Hi Zwinky, There's nothing more thought-provoking than demystifying the powers of God. All very logical and practical questions you've asked. And what of their answers? God knows. I like this ...

This is such a great piece. I know everyone who's been reviewing this has said the same thing too :) You've managed to make it dark and intense while also ...

Hi Sharit, There is no better place like home. And I agree with you. Moving away from something so familiar and then suddenly being exposed to the relentlessness of a ...

Well, the concept and the presentation along with the ideology of describing the whole affair is very good. the POVs of al the characters, including the narrator's had their own ...

Ah, reminds me of my first day when I moved to my new school way back when I was in 5th standard. The fears, hopes, joys, expectancies and all just ...

Beautiful. I was thinking of ways of how to say how great I thought this poem was and beautiful is the only word that matches. This is a flawless piece ...

Wow, gee! Applauses! I love it when people are inspired by things which look dire and hopeless and make out something so creative and inspiring. I love every single line ...

Ajt! Clearly, you've been through some hardship or struggle and with the stressed out usage of words and the raw emotion of this poem, it's plainly visible. The imagery and ...

Hi bookworm, It's a pity you don't write poetry more often because I sure like this piece. The predicament of romance lost and the various effects have been portrayed vividly. ...

Hi Lime, Firstly, congratulations on posting your first poem. And despite it being your first, you went ahead and stretched it long, which is quite commendable. I love rhyme and ...