mungerverna

This short story invokes a lot of emotion, and the content is very well written. I think it could be a whole lot better after a quick round of editing ...

Okay, a little bit of pretext here. I was looking through the featured works on the homepage, and I saw how long the title of this piece is. At first ...

This is an interesting short story! Your use of intermittent internal monologue helps the reader identify with a character who they haven't been given very much time to get to ...

Okay, I'm going to be entirely honest - I have no idea what I was expecting from this, but it definitely was not a text as good as this one, ...

This piece is simple yet beautifully written, and an incredibly interesting statement about the different versions of ourselves that come out during different situations and at different points in our

This is a beautiful story. It delves into what it really means to be human and what ignoring those core emotions can do to a person, or even an entire ...

First of all, I love the title. Emotion mixed with a clever pun, strangely enough, seems to make for a powerful moniker. Regarding the piece itself, I love it just ...

There's the beginning of a good foundation here, but you'll need to finish the skeleton and fill in the narrative a bit more before this can be properly reviewed. That ...

I like this. The foundation is clearly there, and the way you present the plot as a whole is great, and got me interested in the text early on. The ...