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Re: i don't know how to write love letters.
The 1st stanza felt off rhythm but now I don't really care about that since you rationalized that decision very well. Good job!
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: A poem: Grief
I honestly want to thank you. The work you must've done to find all these errors I made. I'm honestly surprised I got 2nd place in a competition with this ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: the five steps of agony
Actually I like the fact the reader is supposed to think about what taking action means.
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: Shadow
This is a great poem HannibalStead, It really does show how mental health can be an issue for anyone. I'm happy I'm not alone on this being my 1st day ...
Dec 5, 2015