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So the short story, it's okay but then considering the length and subject I do not have suggestions on improving it. At least the grammar was proper. The poem, throughout ...

Hello harry576, So I will begin on the good of this poem. It's very relatable, the starting image and the narrative you create is amazing to me. The overall themes ...

Now to start I'm still new to this so I might not be the best reviewer. This poem has a great feel to it with the outcast vibe you kept ...

You have done an amazing job with this story, In someways I'm feeling Edgar Allan Poe with the insanity and sense of uncertainty of the story. Your punctuation is as ...

Some times the rhythm feels off beat to me, was this intended because it didn't flow right to me. I'm fine with the lack of punctuation because I'm like that ...

Looking through this short story the use of punctuation in my eyes, is the quality of a a true author. It was easy to get immersed in the story, very ...