morgansboss

Good description, and great wording. I can really understand the feeling you're trying to portray through the poem. It's the type of thing I can imagine multiple people reading and ...

Wow. This was really good. Short, of course, but still very good. The amount of description you use if amazing and can I really appreciate the way you manage to ...

Okay, so firstly, like Jordin said, it is very big. Also it's confusing when reading ONE chapter to have it be split into TWO views. Try making this two chapters. ...

I can't believe this hasn't had a review yet... It's amazing. The way your sentences flow, it's a relief after seeing so many poems and short stories in which I ...

Wow... this was really great! Sure it could be made better in a few areas but... You're doing good. I can really fit this into the timeline of the original ...

Good job. There were a few grammar and spelling errors that I noticed, but besides that I thought you did a great job. The story is very interesting and original- ...

I think your poem is very good. It's relatable, and your word choice allows the reader to visualize the scenes perfectly despite the brief sentences required for this type of ...

This is really cool. The story is written in a way that is both personal AND readable. I commend you! (By the way, I saw you wrote the word 'bridge' ...

This is really good. My English class is currently covering an in-depth section over the different types of poetry, and may I just say that I was wowed by your ...