monolith

well... the purpose of the poem was to experiment with varying lenghts, I usually write my poems with the same rythmical scheme and the same ammount of syllables, unless I'm ...

THANKS! I mixed up the order of the words, it's supposed to be "if you want to help me too"

I like the overall theme but the way the sentences fit together is something I'd change. The imagery is quite good and vivid and the feelings portrayed by the poem ...

well written and quite interesting. I'd say that it flows well and serves its purpose, good job.

wow, thanks. you actually got the feel I wanted the poem to have. thnx for the review.

hmmm weird, i thought that tasting death was something like dying... but thnx for the review i'll see if i can make any changes

thanl you very much for the review, i'd give you a cookie... but i have non... >.> cuz i ate em... i mean... a monster did, yes, that woefull cookie ...

good work, it is, in essence, what i feel that free verse should be, the fluidity of speech, made a poem. the only issues are ofcourse the grammatical faults, and ...

It's a good poem, really awsome and deep that expressed the beauty of a normal chat, a tought caught by a net inside the mid and turned into a poem ...

your imagery is simply beautyfull, i can perfectly relate to the character who needs to go somwhere green, somewhere better. it is really a good poem, it flows and acts ...