mollycarraway

This is so cute!!! I love it :D I've said this before (not specifically to you, but in general), but I love pieces that I can relate to. And this... ...

Hi there!! So, this was quite lovely, I've gotta say. I love how it describes that internal struggle that so many people go through. It's not an easy thing to ...

Hi there!! First of all: WOW! I've gotta say, I'm QUITE impressed. I've read way too many stories about sad kids that wanna take their own lives, and they all ...

Hi there!!! Ok, I have to start out by saying that this poem is absolutely stunning. I have heard many a friend talk about their feelings towards the father they ...

Hi there! So I really liked this poem. It was short, sweet, and to the point. The only thing I would comment on is: Barren land where nothing grows. It ...

Hey there! So yes, I will agree with the above two reviews, about the 3rd person and 1st person switch. It didn't bother me too much, but others might not ...

WOW!!! That is amazing. I LOVE poetry I can relate to, and this just spoke straight to my heart. Haha and I know that sounds cheesy and cliche, but I ...

For all that this is not a love poem, I still found myself longing for someone to share those moments with that you've described. The way you boldly declare that ...

Hey Perse!! I'm so excited, I get to be the first to review this poem!! I always love reading your works, they're all so thought-provoking. I'm extremely interested to know ...

This is so cute!!!! Hahahaa I imagined it as being sung really loudly and obnoxiously , but I loved it! Now someone needs to come up with a melody for ...

Do you ever have those moments where someones words speak to you in a different way that they speak to others? THAT is the kind of poetry I look for, ...

Ok, so here's my take on this piece. I think you started and ended it REALLY well. I always prefer poems that don't focus on details and drown you in ...

Hi there! I'm kinda excited to be the first to read and reply to this poem. I braced myself, of course, when you warned readers that you weren't very good ...

So I read your little intro first, and thus I wasn't super confused when it came to knowing about the two intertwined topics and the alternating lines. However, when I ...

Very few things in life cause me to hold my breath in anticipation. I am pleased to tell you that this poem was one of those few things. The wording ...