mjl1999

I have to admit this seems quite personal. I wonder whether or not this may be related to an experience you actually had. If not you are extremely talented, but ...

short and sweet. Like it. :) I'm new but i'll look out for your work especially. I doubt i could right as mysterious as this but i never had an ...

wow...i mean jeez...i think you know you did well there :)

You gave me a sense of what you felt. People can give you pointers on different things, but i think you know you achieved what you wanted :). Well done, ...

You wanted to display your thoughts and feelings and you did just that. People can review you on your structure, but i think ultimately you know you achieved what you ...

Thank you i really appreciate your review. Although i can't promise all your hopes will be answered, because i still have a long way to go regarding punctuation and the ...

Is this inspired by Jack Kerouac? I'm reading him right now, he is the inventor of stream of consciousness after all

I'm new so feedback would be greatly appreciated :)